One day two kids went on a boat ride. Their names are Seraphine and Justice. Their parents wished them good luck. They went to the pond. Four kids were playing dodge ball. Someone was playing a drum because it was their birthday.
We saw a boy missing a sock. A lot of fish were in the pond. On the other side of the pond a farmer was planting a crop. A boy and girl were racing. The girl won. A door to a car shut and I felt a drop of rain. It was time to go home so we walked home with our boat. We were happy because tomorrow we were going to hunt deer!
Sera Darby
Hi, Sera! The boat trip sounds like fun. Did you go hunting deer too? Did you catch any?
It’s not real Stephen.
Hey baby girl, you are getting so big! Last time I saw you you were about 6 months old. HUGS to you, Mommy, and Justice, Ok. These are very well written paragraphs.
Thanks.
Hi Sera I sounds like you had a lot of fun. Did you go hunting too? My self I would be able to go hunting. I have friends in Illinois that go hunting and bring the deer home and eat it. They have even eaten bear meat. In case your wondering who I am I am a friend of your mother’s. I hope you and your brother do very well in school and get very good marks.
No, I did not go hunting. That was part of my homework. But, I once went on a boat ride with my grandparents. I went on the boat ride after I wrote the story.
Sera and Justice Its nice you went on a boat ride with your grandparent’s and bet you had a lot of fun. Don’t forget to learn how to swim. I think you did very well writing your story.